Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6 - Screenplays. Show all posts
Showing posts with label G. Assignment 6 - Screenplays. Show all posts
1.  Job roles within the commissioning process.

A commissioning editor is somebody who scouts out new writers, scripts and other media based things. They can buy peoples work and get it to the publishing stage. This type of job involves a lot of research, they will be with the production team from start to finish. 

Producers can deal with aspects of the production that the director doesn't deal with. The producers help transfer the original story into a film. The producers have a very important role when dealing with legal issues, cast and crew and even some budgeting. Once a script is brought the producer can change aspects of the script or even the whole idea completely, this starts to annoy script writers, because their original idea is no longer a thing. An example of a producer is Micheal G Wilson (Casino Royale, Skyfall, For Your Eyes Only).

The director initially turns the story into video and audio, the director is also one of the most important people on set, he is in charge of the producer, DOP and all actors on set. They can help the director of photography direct certain shots that he has in mind after reading the script. A famous director is Alfred Hitchcock, he is a English film director he has made movies such as Psycho, The birds and Vertigo. 

A script editor will evaluate screenplays and give different perspectives, they also assess the relationship between between screenwriters and producers, they present all scripts to the team, at development meetings to make sure all parties agree with the same vision for the project. Script editors should also negotiate their contracts before they start their work. Most script editors are freelance. 

2. Commissioning bodies.

Commissioning bodies are used when somebody is trying to sell a their product to a production company.

A lot of writers use agents to help them find potential jobs, the way it works is that a production company will contact an agency to see if the agents client will be interested in writing a script. Most big time screen writers will use an agent but some independent screen writers will not due to costs. 

Competition is also a way of finding new writers, BBC writers room is an example of an organisation who uses competition.  The competition could have certain requirements for example the length of the writing or even the genre. 

Some organisations help the screenwriter's work with actual writers, this is very useful as instead of buying screenplays they can help develop the idea and the structure.

Independent directors mainly produce their own screenplays, this saves them a lot in cost, small production company's will have the same small people doing different roles to save on costs.

Most independent films that are feature length professional films are released by independent production companies, some production companies include; Film4 productions and Lions Gate Films. 

Warner Brother, Disney and Paramount these are companies that release the finished product, they make their money of the box office revenue and the sale of the film. 

3. The role of the writer throughout production.

After a project has been given the green light, it enters the pre-production stage, first the Writer will be commissioned to make the screenplay, the writer will then be given set guidelines from the idea or true story or comic books. 

Script editing is completed by the script editor.  The screenwriter will be given feedback on how they can improve the script. Instead of pointing out what is wrong with the script, the script editor will sit down with the screenwriter to help change and improve the script. 

Before the production process begins the script is made easier for shooting, the script becomes a shooting script. This is when page numbers and scene headings are added. If things need to be changed whilst in production then these notes can be logged and the new changes will be sent to all the cast and crew. 

Directors and producers have the final say of the outcome of the script, this somewhat ruins the writing process for a screenwriter, they have worked on a script for so long for some of their script to be changed, screenwriters usually dislike the changes and do not want to have their names mentioned. 

Page lock-down is when changed need to be made to the script, the pages will be coded and sent to the cast and crew as separate pages rather than sending the whole script again. The pages that have been changed they are given codes, If the the script goes on to say page 50 and the changes have been made on page 22, the codes for the changed page will be 22a rather than 23 as the page after may not be changed. 

4. Working as a writer

Agent representation is very important when working as a writer, some production companies will not take scripts unless they have been sent from an agent. Agent representations will ask for a piece of work from the writer before making an appointment with them, this is to make sure they really enjoy your work. The company will only take people who approach them the right way, they prefer if you do not constantly keep contacting to see if they have received you work, because they will get back to you in due course. A good example of would be 'The Agency' (In London). They are proud to represent their writers, they represent all manners of writers and directors, from working in drama to working in major Hollywood films. 

Optioning is when a screenplay is taken by either an individual or a company for a fixed cost for a fixed amount of time, in that time the script is with the individual or company the screenwriter cannot sell the screenplay to anybody else, this offers exclusivity to the company that is paying for the screenplay. In that the the individual or company can change the script to meet certain needs if they wish to. 

Professional representation for screenwriters helps when managing your career, it helps the screenwriter choose and develop screenplays for potential job roles, Alan Brodie is a literary agency whose clients are writers/ directors. They work to help new writers who will then become the voices of the next generation.

Time management is different for every writer, some writers will work late evening till early hours of the morning, whereas some will write in the morning till mid afternoon. Writers have to keep a balance when meeting deadlines as they also have to meet new and existing clients to keep more work coming in. A lot of screenwriters jump from script to script, to stop getting distracted. 

All writers have legal and ethical considerations to reflect on, one of the main considerations is copyright. This is a issue in the media industry, copyright prevents other writers from stealing or copying other writers work, this comes under plagiarism and could possibly result in the artist being sued. 

Another legal and ethical issue is bias within the media industry, writers need to make sure they are not bias, especially when associating things with moral and political views. Libel laws can also come under copyright as you would need to make sure the product doesn't offend anybody.

A watershed is the time when something is broadcasted, for example if shows have sexual content there is a law that states nothing can be shown of that nature before 9pm. This would then also meet Ofcoms guidelines.

Censorship is a vital thing when considering broadcasting your project for a screenwriter. The writer will have to take this into consideration when discussing their target audience and the rating they are aiming for. 



Go Short is an international short film festival.  In 2017 it will be the 9th edition of the go short. It is the main Dutch festival. For five days, 250 films and more are screened in and around LUX in Nijmegen.  Some of the regulations for this festival are:

  • The film is no longer than thirty minutes. 
  • The film is produced in (geographical) Europe, the director or producer is European or the film was mainly financed by a European country. 
  • The film has no dialogue or clear-spoken English dialogue and/or commentary. If this is not the case, English subtitles are required.
  • The film is finished after 1st December, 2015.  http://goshort.nl/
Here I have annotated Cuffs Episode 2 final shooting screenplay. I have annotated this with script conventions that I have used and learnt.




Here is a screenplay from the TV series Our Girl.  This scene shows good use of outer presence, it includes gestures, expressions, physical appearance and style of speech. At the beginning of this scene Molly is walking outside the walls of the compound. In the action it states that Molly's breathing becomes loud, that she is getting tense. This suggests that she is nervous and anxious. During this scene you can tell by the style of speech and her movement that she is scared. She is surrounded by Afghan men and guards with guns. In the action paragraph it stare that Molly is very tense and nervous. It shows good use of movement when somebody tugs on her arm. The movement shows that she is startled. This scene doesn't include much of inner presence as it doesn't show the knowledge or temperament of the two characters Molly and Bashira. It also doesn't show the characters likes or dislikes or the characters goals. This scene does include some context, Molly is nervous and scared but when she looks over to the watch tower, James is stood their, with a gun in hand. he points down at two Afghan men, the two men lift their clothing to prove they are unarmed. This gives molly a sense of relief. From this you can tell there is some sort of relationship between Molly and James although you can't identify if the relationship is through a brother and sister or through love you can sense a relationship.

Two short films

This short film is called Imagine, its based on a 10 year old girl called Mollie who suffers from Niemann-Pick Type C. An extremely rare, incurable disease. John F. McDonald wrote the screenplay for this 10 minute short. This short film, uses V.O (voice over) to portray emotion, it makes the audience focus on the little girl who is suffering. V.O is something I am going to use In my screenplay, to portray emotion of my main protagonist.



This short film is called A social Life, the film is based on a women called Meredith who is living the life she has always dreamed of online. Kerith Lemon is the writer for this ten minute short. This short film has a good use of lighting and cinematography which is something I want to portray in my short film, the camera movements are smooth, and editing is unique. The female Meredith is also very similar to my main protagonist. 

Audience Research
For my short film I would like the film to fit both genders and almost all ages and all ethnical backgrounds. I would say my idea would range from ages of 16 to 40. In the demographic table I would say that my short film idea would fit in band E, for the unemployed, students, pensioners and casual workers.  For the psychographic table I would say my short film would fall into the aspirers and mainstreamers. 

After I pitched my idea to the class, Sean and other students gave me feedback of what they liked and what I could possibly improve on, the ending was the main thing students commented on, wondering how it would work visually, I took these comments into mind and changed the script slightly making it easier to film and making the story connect better. 

I made a survey to show what target audience I would be looking for and to figure out what others think of my idea. 





Research into themes, locations and characters
For my short film, I wanted it to fit in the theme of transformation and innocence, In the film I have a character that was once known as being evil but has come back and has changed his appearance and his behaviours, and according to Validmr Propp's theory this character would now be the hero, he saves the main protagonist. 

I struggled finding locations for my short, and where I would like the short to be based, in the end I picked the heart of London, although this is not practically for filming. The location fit with the storyline. 

For characters I used Validmr Propp's character theory, he has eight different character types, these being: the villain, the dispatcher, the helper, the princess or prize, her father, the doner, the hero or victim/seeker hero, and the false hero. His character theories work mainly in super hero films but I wanted to try and make them work in a romantic comedy. I also used Tzvetan Todorov's narrative theory, of having an equilibrium, then a disruption then a realisation, which then comes a restored order and then a new equilibrium, this is the structure for my screenplay. 

After researching into characters, locations and themes I researched into existing media texts, for example films and screenplays that fit my theme, locations and characters. One media text I found was a film called When Harry Met Sally,  This film includes a male and a female who are friends but have sexual interactions whilst being friends, this is something I wanted to include in my short, having an ex come back into the mix, could they just be friends or could more happen. 

Another media text I got inspiration from was Sleeping in Seattle(1993) The film is revolved around a long distance relationship and how is it possible to find love again after a big heartbreak and how the mind will always lead you in the right direction, this idea was a big part of my screenplay, my main protagonist had her heart broken, and found love again, but the ex has come back and her mind is unsure what to do, but she puts herself in the right direction, and reunites with her ex and is no longer heart broken.

Bibliography

https://www.goshort.nl/en/
http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/scripts/cuffs
http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/scripts/Our-Girl
https://www.slideshare.net/Katrinabrookes/todorovs-narrative-theory-24244633







Despite the difficult task of finding justice, Billy Jones manages to successfully find justice and the driver is sentenced in prison for 20 months and has a two year driving ban. This gives Billy Jones closure to her best friend, and helps everybody around her accept the difficult time. 
Days after a horrific car crash, Billy Jones attempts to find justice for the loss of her best friend, who died at the scene of the crash. The driver of the car was on drugs and Billy wants to prove this. Finding the task difficult she seeks different ways to accomplish this.