SOme good dialogue here Zara although there's not quite as much SUBTEXT as there could be - this is where what's NOT said is as important as what is. Also be careful with spelling - eg 'effect/affect' and also with the formatting sometimes - eg you have a character who continues talking but you break it up give him a "CONT'D" direction when you don't need to as it's all one speech without additional scene directions.
SOme good dialogue here Zara although there's not quite as much SUBTEXT as there could be - this is where what's NOT said is as important as what is. Also be careful with spelling - eg 'effect/affect' and also with the formatting sometimes - eg you have a character who continues talking but you break it up give him a "CONT'D" direction when you don't need to as it's all one speech without additional scene directions.
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